After reading "Raymond's run" by Toni Barbara, a story about squaky, a girl that runs, who has a brother with mental problems. I can say I didn't like it, the story has self consumed characters and in my opionion an incomplete plot.}
The characters in the story are self consemed, I think this because Squaky always says that no one can beat her and that she is the best. The same is with Gretchen, she is so sure that she can beat Squaky. Through the story they are so rude with each other anbd won't accept the other one.
I think this story has an incomplete plot because Squaky is so rude through the story and changes to being nice in a short period of time. the plot doesn't go from climax to falling action, it jumps to the resolution right away.
I conclude that Raymond's run writen by Toni Barbara is a story with an incomplete plot and self consumed characters, because of the actitude change in the main characters, and all of thew rude characters in the story.
The characters in the story are self consemed, I think this because Squaky always says that no one can beat her and that she is the best. The same is with Gretchen, she is so sure that she can beat Squaky. Through the story they are so rude with each other anbd won't accept the other one.
I think this story has an incomplete plot because Squaky is so rude through the story and changes to being nice in a short period of time. the plot doesn't go from climax to falling action, it jumps to the resolution right away.
I conclude that Raymond's run writen by Toni Barbara is a story with an incomplete plot and self consumed characters, because of the actitude change in the main characters, and all of thew rude characters in the story.